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Day 22: Tribal Council

September 6th, 2011, 1:27 pm

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Reply Vilecheese, September 6th, 2011, 1:36 pm

Ibuki's secret is out in the open, and Hakoda's gone. Well...not really, since he made jury.

I find that one of the most beloved types of characters in Survivor-like fanfics are the premerge redemption arc characters. That's the role Hakoda played here. Though unlike people such as Krauss, I tried to make his transformation slow and gradual, to avoid making Ibuki seem too cheesy or cliche of a Manic Pixie Dream Girl.

I know people may hate that I broke up the Hadokubi couple, but...if I didn't, they'd just be doing the same thing every episode. Their storyline was complete once they became friends.

Also a question for you guys: Yea or Nay on Ponderosa comics?

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User's Comments:

Reply Slicer37, September 6th, 2011, 2:54 pm

Sorry Vile, but I didn't like this episode. I felt that it focused way to much on a "funny challenge" that wasn't that funny.

And nay, Ponderosa is a waste of time.

Reply Vilecheese, September 6th, 2011, 3:43 pm

@Slicer37: This wasn't one of my favs either, TBH. I don't think the "funny challenge" got THAT much focus, though. There was also the focus on the merge and all the Mokobo drama and stuff.

Reply SSBFreak (Guest), September 6th, 2011, 4:16 pm

A little disappointed with the results, but I guess Hakoda was running on borrowed time.

In all honesty, the choice for doing Ponderosa comics is up to you. If you think you can get more character development out of Ponderosa, then do it, but if you feel that they're mainly filler, you don't need to bother with it.

Reply Slicer37, September 7th, 2011, 6:53 pm

Are Hadoka and Ikubi meant to be a couple?

Reply Vilecheese, September 7th, 2011, 7:10 pm

@Slicer37: You could interpret it either way, I guess. Personally, I think Ibuki has a crush on Hakoda and he considers them to be just friends, but who knows?

Reply Vilecheese, September 7th, 2011, 7:11 pm

@SSBFreak: I dunno, I think I might be able to get the development across at Tribal Councils, but I'm not sure.

Reply Slicer37, September 7th, 2011, 8:24 pm

Wait a minute...

Mordicai still has the idol that he found in episode 4.

DUN DUN DUN!

Reply Vilecheese, September 7th, 2011, 11:14 pm

@Slicer37: Or does he?

Reply qazox, November 6th, 2011, 2:06 am

How the hell did Melissa vote at all? The anvil never was taken off of her (unless it was taken off off-screen then put back on)... unless Ibuki/God just cast her vote for her (or took it off just long enough for her to vote)... but if she did that, wouldn't she have saved Hakoda instead???

Reply Vilecheese, November 7th, 2011, 6:05 pm

@qazox: You aren't supposed to know how Melissa voted with the anvil on her. That's the joke.

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