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Day 10: Maddie World

March 5th, 2011, 12:00 am

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IMO, that's a pretty good reason to be emo.
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Reply Vilecheese, March 5th, 2011, 12:00 am

I don't know what Blanc had to do to pass initiation, but you can bet it was painful.

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User's Comments:

Reply SPDark, March 5th, 2011, 12:15 am

This comic: Aww~ How sweet~

Prev Comic/Response: That makes too much sense though!

^^; On another note, can I ask you for something?

Reply Ceviana, March 5th, 2011, 12:16 am

Poor Maddie.

Reply Vilecheese, March 5th, 2011, 12:21 am

@Kari: Sure, what is it?

@Ceviana: Skazz isn't the only one with problems, that's for sure.

Reply SPDark, March 5th, 2011, 12:25 am

Can you tell me how I'm doing on my Survivor fic? ^^; It's more along the lines of edgic-wise.
http://kari10101.deviantart.com/art/Survivor-Sausagefest-Ep-1-191194293 First chapter.

Reply Vilecheese, March 5th, 2011, 12:37 am

@Kari I'm already doing too many edgics. ;.;

Reply SPDark, March 5th, 2011, 12:41 am

Just some advice, then?

Reply Vilecheese, March 5th, 2011, 12:48 am

@Kari Advice on how to do edgics, or make a winner edgically-viable...or...?

Reply SPDark, March 5th, 2011, 12:51 am

How to make a winner edgically-viable.

Reply Vilecheese, March 5th, 2011, 1:06 am

@Kari Okay, for that, my advice is to:

a) Give the winner at least a few CPs spread out evenly.

b) Give them a "breakthrough" episode where he/she (well, it would be "he" in your fic) has a really big CP, where we really see how exactly he plays the game and how it all works. This is typically a "winner's confessional".

c) Give him character development. He shouldn't have a straight line of CP neutral, give him some high points and some low points. When (not if, when) he makes an error let him attempt to fix it.

d) DO NOT MAKE HIM A GARY STU. Then again, that sorta goes with C).

At least this is the stuff I like to see in a winner. You can ask others if they have different opinions on what makes a good winner.

Reply SPDark, March 5th, 2011, 11:30 am

Aha, thanks. ^^ Good to see where I can take the person who's winning.

Most of them aren't Stus...Only one could be considered it from my mind, but there are things that prevent him from being "ZOMGDIAF!" from the Stu hunter's PoV.

Reply LandenMaster, June 2nd, 2013, 5:16 pm

Awwwwwwwwwww...........

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